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[Falling] Chapter 12

  • Jan. 30th, 2008 at 7:44 PM
Min not cute
Title: Search
Pairings: JaeMin, YooSu
Rating: PG-13ish
Notes: Warning for super-duper ridiculous portions of shortness. Barely a chapter. Call it a mini-chap, if you will… *sighs* Two weeks into the semester, and I'm already pathetically behind on my homework. Thus the shortness. And the slightly-delayed-ness. *shrugs* Next chap's 'bout halfway done, though, and it's already longer than this one. Hope to finish it up and have it out to you guys by tomorrow to make up for how insanely short this one is. Deal? *grins*
Summary: Sequel to Possession. Falling can mean so many things: falling into his arms, falling in love, falling out, falling to pieces, falling apart...
Previous: Possession, Bonus Scenes, Falling: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Poetry, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Part 10, Part 11



Chapter 12: Search



You hear steady, solid thuds from inside the bathroom, and your mind conjures up all the worst scenarios. Sharing a look with Yunho, you're positive the worry and desperation in his eyes mirrors the same in yours. "We need to get this door open," you mutter, wishing you had the ability to pick locks.

The same thought must occur to Yunho at the same time. He stares at you until you come to the same resolution he obviously has. "Junsu." You both nod at the same time. As you lead the way back to their bedroom, you hope with whatever you have left that Su's been able to calm Chunnie down.

You don't remember ever being as angry at Yoochun as you were in the moments right after his tirade. The hysterical look in Min's eyes, the way he shook and gasped for breath… The image burned itself into your brain. You don't think you've forgiven Chun, but your worry for Min has pushed out your ability to be angry for now.

Yoochun huddles in Junsu's arms, looking as small and miserable as you've ever seen him. Junsu traces soothing circles around his back and looks up when you enter. His eyes flash warning and protection, but he doesn't say anything. "We need your help, Su."

A few minutes later, Junsu is working at the lock on the bathroom door as you and Yunho stand anxiously behind him. Yoochun opted to stay in the bedroom, reasoning he'd be the last person Min would want to see when that door opened. "Sometime," Su mutters around the bobby pins in his mouth without taking his eyes off the door, "I really have to teach you two how to do this."

The door finally pops open with a click, and Junsu stands up to back away. He pauses before leaving. "Let us know, later, how he is. Okay?" You nod, watch him head back to his room. The thumping sound from inside the bathroom stopped a few minutes before Junsu got the door open; you wonder if you should be worried or relieved.

Yunho looks at you, motions for you to go in before him. You move the short distance to the door and hesitate for an extended split-second. Pulling in a deep breath, you push the door open slowly. You close your eyes and hope for the best.

Comments

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[info]theresa_lynne wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 02:02 am (UTC)
Why a cliffhanger? Whhhyyyyy? T___T

Are they going to open the door to find Changmin acting as if nothing happened? Oh darn, I thought I was going to avoid asking a question, but it seems my brain and fingers can't help but to type them. XD
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:01 am (UTC)
You... will find what they find. Tomorrow. *nods* And I don't mind questions, considering that 99% of the time I don't answer 'em. *giggles*
[info]kittypoker wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
*pouts*

*sniffles*

What happens next? What does Jae find?
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:01 am (UTC)
You already know now!! ^__^
[info]kittypoker wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:44 am (UTC)
Yes I do! The Buffalo turned Turtle-Heather knows! :D
[info]jaemint wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 02:16 am (UTC)
A CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRRRRR?????

*strangles you*

You're seriously evil, woman.

I'm dying to know what Min is doing inside the bathroom!!!!!! Update!!!!
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:04 am (UTC)
Gah!! Did we not already have the strangling discussion?! *pulls out crazy-ninja moves to escape*

Update, yes. Tomorrow. *grins*
[info]jaemint wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:09 am (UTC)
Well, I don't mind having it again. *strangles more*

Yay! Tomorrow! Will stalk this for possible spot. XD
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
Ack!! *dies, followed by ghostly voice from above* Hm, see that. You've gone and killed the updater. Guess that update might be a bit... delayed. *grins*
[info]realitywaiting wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Cliffy! how could you!! T^T HOMG! *is frantic* what's happening????????
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
I don't knoooow!!! Just happened that way. 'M sorry... >.< Tomorrow, promise, answers. *nods*
[info]figmagination wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:09 am (UTC)
That was the most evil cliffhanger in the history of EVER! I am so worried for Minnie! Please update soon!~ T___T
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:17 am (UTC)
History of ever? Really?! *feels strangely accomplished* Well, anywayz, I shall try not to drag out the torture too long. Will update tomorrow, so long as jaemint doesn't kill me dead. *nods*
[info]shinchul303 wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 02:18 am (UTC)
I have to second that. This move is Satan incarnate.

You'd BETTER update or there'll be real trouble.

I'm reminded of "Just give me my fanfic, and no one gets hurt."
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 04:08 am (UTC)
Is it bad that I'm so please to get such a reaction? *giggles*

Update shall be up in, oh, about 10 minutes. So there. ^__^
[info]chloe1910 wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 09:02 am (UTC)
cliffie??????????????

Why are you stilltormenting us....my heart was about to pop out when you ended it with a cliffie!! you evil!!

*still chasing after you with flying durians*
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 04:09 am (UTC)
I am evil, damn it. I've given up resisting. *shrugs*

And don't let your heart pop out. I've heard that's bad for you.

*shall continue running from durians after posting next chap.*
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 04:29 pm (UTC)
*glares*

I do not like cliffies. It's only okay when I'm the author, or I know what's going to happen. T____T

I - no, I won't ask. -.-" I guess I'll know tomorrow?

I feel sorry for Chunnie though. ;_____;
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 04:11 am (UTC)
Hah, so, taste of your own medicine, neh?

And, really, you could ask all ya want. I don't give any answers away, no matter what. *grins*

Yeah, Chunnie's sad. Hell, they're all sad. It's a very sad home right now.
[info]dain_maxwell wrote:
Jan. 31st, 2008 11:25 pm (UTC)
YEAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
i has internets
i is reading fun stuff
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 04:12 am (UTC)
*giggles* You're so silly. But does that mean you've actually read this fic, or was it just convenient to comment on it? ^__^
[info]emda wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 01:38 am (UTC)
*dies* I just hope that he is not in a pool of his own blood.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Feb. 1st, 2008 04:13 am (UTC)
*shudders* Um, no thanks. I should not like it for my dear, faithful readers to kill me. Would not be fun times. *shakes head*
[info]daisuke4288 wrote:
Apr. 15th, 2008 01:03 am (UTC)
*evil look*

oh god i hope Min's okay. i really hope so.
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