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[Falling] Chapter 5

  • Dec. 22nd, 2007 at 12:18 AM
Min not cute
Title: Missing
Pairings: JaeMin, YooSu
Rating: PG-13ish
Notes: I debated holding onto this for a bit but decided against it. Next part (Min's finally!) will definitely be posted Christmas day. Until then, I give you Junsu's part.
Summary: Sequel to Possession. Falling can mean so many things: falling into his arms, falling in love, falling out, falling to pieces, falling apart...
Previous: Possession, Bonus Scenes, Falling: Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4



Chapter 5: Missing



Jae cries for the whole 45 minutes before you all have to leave to get to the dance studio. You can't blame him; you'd do the same in his position. He sits eerily still and silent in the van. At one point, you watch Yunho lean a bit closer to him, as if to check that he was still breathing.

Yoochun has his arms wrapped around your waist and his face buried in you shoulder. He cried, too. Partly because of the simple fact of the break-up but also because he just feels so bad for Jae, to see how much pain Jae is going through. He hasn't told you this, but you know it anyway.

You share a look with Yunho, and you understand that this will be one of those times that you'll have to step up. You're going to have to help him lead all of them through this mess. And you know you'll be talking to Min one-on-one first thing.

The four of you file out of the van, pause before realizing no one else was getting out. You wipe any remaining tears from Yoochun's cheeks before heading into the building. Out of the corner of your eye, you see Jae pulling his shoulders up to stand straight and tall.

You're a little bit early, so you start stretches and warm-ups to pass the time. The air in the room hang heavy with tension as everyone waits for Min's arrival, anxiety and uncertainty coloring every movement.

The clock hits your start time, and all four of you turn almost habitually to stare at the door. Expectant. Changmin has never been late, for anything. The door doesn't open. You release a breath and grip Chun's hand.

After five minutes, you all decide without words to give him five more. After those five, Yunho attempts calling him. No answer. You don't want to be worried. Twenty minutes after that, you put your phones down in defeat. Either he has his phone off, he doesn't have it with him, or he's ignoring all of you. That's all. One of those three.

Yunho looks in the mirror, stares at the reflections. He cancels practice. No one would have been able to dance anyway. As he walks away to alert your manager of the situation, you and Yoochun force Jae to sit down and take a few deep breaths. "Don't need you having a heart attack on us," you half-heartedly joke.

The ride home is possessed by a bouncy, nervous silence. Every second that ticks by is another opportunity for bad news. You try to quiet the old mom-line on repeat in your head: lying dead in a ditch somewhere on the side of the road. No. Not lying dead, in a ditch or anywhere else.

The problem is, you all still have that picture in your heads from just a few months ago. It's far too easy to imagine Min lying dead somewhere, because you'd watched him come way too close not long enough ago. And every time you close your eyes, you see him bleeding and broken.

It's not fair, you think. Not fair at all that you have to worry like this twice.

Comments

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[info]theresa_lynne wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 06:56 am (UTC)
Oh my god. Why didn't he show up? Is he alright? What is going on!!! Ahhh. Please tell me the ending doesn't involve dead!Min. D:
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:03 pm (UTC)
He didn't show up because... *mumblemumbles, nods* And that's all I'm gonna say.
[info]chloe1910 wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 07:07 am (UTC)
ARGH!! What's going on???? What happened to Min? Argh..don't tell me he quit the band???????
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:07 pm (UTC)
Oooh, Min. *sighs, shrugs* Can't really say anything else without giving secrets away...
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 09:56 am (UTC)
T__T Nooo... Don't tell me he quit! Ahh, now I'm looking even more forward to Christmas (I don't think it's healthy :P), I have to know what's wrong with Min! >___
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:09 pm (UTC)
Hmm, well, if you reeeallllly wanna know, I can let Min tell ya. *smirks, pushes Min at you, runs away*
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:21 pm (UTC)
MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN! *tackles*
YOU BASTARD, WHAT DID YOU DO TO POOR JAE? T_____T

I've got a feeling he won't tell me...
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:56 pm (UTC)
Ah, well, it was worth a try. *grins* Guess I'm gonna have to take him back from ya, then, since I'll be needing him to write the next chap... ^__^
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
NOOOO! You can't take him back now that I've finally got him? O____O

Unless... to write the next chapter you say? So if you get him back now, you'll finish it much faster? *considers* Alright then. *hands you Min* ♥
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 04:20 am (UTC)
Hmm...

Well, I may finish it faster, but I still won't post 'til Christmas. Just 'cause I'm mean like that. *grins, grabs Min and runs away*
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 02:10 pm (UTC)
You are so mean!

*runs after you with rotten pineapples*
[info]briochick wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 03:49 pm (UTC)
Hey, you've been a busy little writer! Ok, so...Merry Christmas! (I know it's early, but I might forget later)
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 04:10 pm (UTC)
I have been busy! Winter break is good for me like that, I guess. *grins* And Merry early-Christmas to you too!
[info]realitywaiting wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 05:19 pm (UTC)
I'm not supposed to be here...(this little obsession cannot be healthy) GUH! I knew it! I knew he wouldn't show up! where did he run off to? what's going through his head? T^T those boys! they're all worried....Min can be real selfish sometimes it seems.....okay getting a little too involved now I blame you and your story ability XD ha ha! okay i'm off!
[info]realitywaiting wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 05:20 pm (UTC)
And of all things not to do during this season! Sorry! SO! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 04:27 am (UTC)
If only I could answer those questions... And I don't know that "selfish" is quite the right word for Min. It's more... oblivious. But I think that'll be more obvious in his chap.

I will gladly take that kind of blame *giggleblush*

Merry Christmas to you, too!! (Though hopefully you'll be back ON Christmas to read that chap... ^__^)
[info]kratynoi wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 08:19 pm (UTC)
Gah! That's an awful place to end. Makes me start thinking the same thoughts Junsu is thinking....but you wouldn't do that to us...right?? Plus, you said that Changmin's POV is up next, so unless he's having an out-of-body experience, he has to be alive!
Poor Jaejoong though...poor everyone! It's affecting them all pretty badly. Changmin! What's going on in that head of yours?
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 04:30 am (UTC)
Hm, out-of-body experience... Now THAT would make for an interesting chapter. *grins, contemplates changing the direction of this whole fic* Just remember, if Min's dead after this, it's all your fault now. *giggles*
[info]kratynoi wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 05:26 am (UTC)
Wah?!?! O.o Oh no!!! I take back what I said. Erase erase. You remember NOTHING! Don't kill Minnie. ;.; I'll have rabid fangirls after me....*shivers*
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 05:33 am (UTC)
For the sake of saving your life from rabid fangirls, I shall play along: Remember what? *laughs*
[info]kratynoi wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
Yay!! Changmin's saved from a terrible death!!! *huggles you, glomps Changmin* I mean *cough* look! Changmin's back! What?! Death? I have no clue where that came from. ^.~
[info]letitbegin wrote:
Dec. 22nd, 2007 11:55 pm (UTC)
Ooh Changmin. I hope he is okay :( My first thought was just as Junsu is trying not to suspect. He's okay, right? Ohhh I am so rarely so excited over a fanfic but I really can't wait for the next update.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 04:31 am (UTC)
I hope he's okay, too. *nods, pokes Min* You're okay, right, Minnie? *pokes again*

It makes me happy that you're so excited. *grins*
[info]yummyfruit wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
Min is being strange. the least he could do is answer the call or atleast text and say he wont be making it to the practice.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 04:32 am (UTC)
He is being strange. And it'll all be explained. Promise. ^_^
[info]kurogoma wrote:
Dec. 23rd, 2007 03:21 pm (UTC)

It's not just Jae anymore, whatever the thoughts that are ruling Min's head and actions.

I hope Min doesn't stay oblivious for too long....it's hurting everyone, including Junsu, YooChun and Yunho. And if Min doesn't realize that, I hope he does soon.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 24th, 2007 02:47 am (UTC)
Min's actions are hurting everyone, because the five of them are just too intertwined for any single action to not affect all of them.

And Min doesn't realize anything just yet. That'll become quite apparent in the next chap.
[info]kittypoker wrote:
Dec. 24th, 2007 06:14 am (UTC)
You kill me woman! You really do! Where's Min!!!! I shouldn't be asking this next question because I think you've all ready told me, but oh well! Whhhy did he break up with Jae!!!!!!
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 24th, 2007 06:20 am (UTC)
You kill me back, so it all works out. *grins*

Min is... oh, gosh, I can't tell you in a reply and give it away to everyone!! Ask me in AIM, and I'll let ya know. *nods*
[info]jaemint wrote:
Dec. 24th, 2007 09:09 am (UTC)
This is the only one fic that I cannot skip through even though I'm supposed to be going offline now to go back home for Christmas. :D

I won't kill you first for this, I guess I'll just wait patiently for the happy ending now. But, poor Jae. *hugs him*

Before I forget, MERRY CHRISTMAS!! And I hope to see more happy stuff from Falling after Xmas. :D
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 25th, 2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
*grins* Thank you! Glad you enjoy it so much.

Yes, patience is key. *nods* It'll start getting better, eventually.

Merry Christmas back!! ^__^
[info]zhyune wrote:
Feb. 23rd, 2008 02:47 pm (UTC)
OOH I HOPE MINNIE IS ALRIGHT! )):

*hops off to read the next chapter.
[info]daisuke4288 wrote:
Apr. 15th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
Min must be having the guys' version of PMS. *blinks*

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