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[Possession] Sequel: Falling, Chapter 1

  • Nov. 6th, 2007 at 10:47 PM
Min not cute
Title: Five Takes
Pairings: JaeMin, YooSu
Rating: PG-13ish
Notes: It's finally heeeere!! Sorry I made y'all wait so long, but the Possession sequel is now officially underway. This first chap. is kinda more of a prologue with five different p.o.v's. I'll name 'em all at the end, but half the fun is guessing. *grins*
Summary: Falling can mean so many things: falling into his arms, falling in love, falling out, falling to pieces, falling apart...
Previous: Possession, Bonus Scenes



Chapter 1: Five Takes



One.

And now you have everything you'd ever wished for as a kid: a family who loves and supports you, friends with whom you've formed a second kind of family life, a career that is also your passion, and a lover that is a study of contradictions in the best way imaginable.

You knew from the beginning that he was going to be something special to you. He was strong and vulnerable, unsure and confident, mischievous and mature. The first time you'd looked into his eyes, you'd fallen into surprise and interest. He is your everything, and you aren't going to let him go for anything.



Two.

So you have one more thing to look out for when it comes to your little family. With both couples set next to each other in the now-natural formation, temptations sometimes threaten to take over common sense. Most of the time, you only have to catch an eye to get your message across. Other times, they need a slightly firmer reprimand.

It doesn't matter. You wouldn't have them any other way. You'd never trade their subtle--or not, really--flirtations for better behavior. You find yourself relishing the outward signs of their happiness, their laughter and smiles. For right now, this is your definition of contentment.



Three.

Everything should fall into place now. Everyone is happy, has what they want. Even those who happen to still be single seem satisfied with the way things are. So now you should be able to relax and just be with each other.

You're cautiously optimistic. You've learned through far too much experience that just when everything seems the most perfect, it all starts falling apart. You choose to believe, however, that won't happen here. You make a conscious decision to hope for the best, because right now, you have everything you never could have dreamed of.



Four.

Something prevents you from feeling entirely at ease, but you can't be completely sure what that something is. Everyone is smiling again; you've all gotten to where you needed and wanted to be. And yet, something just doesn't feel quite right.

No one else seems to acknowledge this tenuous happiness, perhaps not wanting to jinx what you've all got. You want to yell out and make them see. At the same time, you don't want to condemn all of you to that kind of pessimism and heartbreak. So you keep your silence and hope that your fears will stay strictly subconscious.



Five.

The uneasiness still creeps in on you at times. You stomp it down, push it out, but it always sneaks back. You'd thought, before, that finally solving the love problem would help everything else. If it's helped at all, the problems that cropped up after have blocked out that relief.

So you're back to hiding again, hoping they don't see you struggle against yourself. You wage war against your own mind and pray no one notices. Because you don't want to be that person. You don't want to be the one who's never satisfied. You've been given every opportunity in the world, in your career and your love-life and everything else. So why can't you just be normal, let this make you happy?

You don't know. And you're not sure how much longer you can take it.



End.



A.N. - So, yes, there it is. If I failed so completely that you couldn't figure them out, the order, first to last: Jaejoong, Yunho, Yoochun, Junsu, Changmin. So, let me know how you liked it, if I should even bother continuing. *grins*

Comments

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[info]theresa_lynne wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 06:21 am (UTC)
Ehhh... ooooh... hm. I can't seem to find words... just sounds. XDDDD Please do continue. I want to know what's going on. ^^
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:36 pm (UTC)
*grins* I will continue. Hopefully soon. Once school gets out of the way... *kicks schoolwork*
[info]strawberry_hit wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 06:40 am (UTC)
lol..i could only figure changmin and yunho out...maybe i was reading this while listening and singing along to music..i should reread it..anyway ..update soon..ah...what are to come of them...
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:37 pm (UTC)
I will update... as soon as the next part gets written. *grins*
[info]kurogoma wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 06:51 am (UTC)

I got Jaejoong, Yunho and Changmin right. Jaejoong, I figured, is the most optimistic one, and somehow I felt that Changmin was going to be his extreme opposite.

Sounds like it's going to be bucket loads of angst ahead, but I believe in happy endings...so I am going to believe in falling into his arms, falling in love, and pretend I didn't see the rest... :P
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:39 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I feel kinda bad for making their parts soooo completely opposite. Like, Jae's all happy and satisfied, and Min's all... not. *sighs* Poor Jae!!

Buckets of angst... hmm... yeah, probably. *grins* I like happy endings, too. But, by all means, continue practicing your selective blindness. *laughs*
[info]chloe1910 wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 08:07 am (UTC)
I think Yunho and Changmin's are the easiest to guess. I got Jaejoong right too but somehow I got both Junsu and Yoochun wrong...

Oh no, the last one soonds like a promise to angst! NO!!! I dun wan anything bad to happen to Jaemin! I love Jaemin!!

Sigh, You better get the enxt one out soon, or else, hmph...I stalk you even in your sleep..hehehe..
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:42 pm (UTC)
I was hoping Yunho's, at least, was fairly obvious. Min's too, as long as everyone remembered Possession. The rest... *shrugs*

What kind of story would this be if there were no angst? Just keep in mind, I love the JaeMin, too... *huggles them*

Hm, I'm not very interesting in my sleep, but feel free to stalk all you want. *giggls* Hopefully next one will be out soon.
[info]jaemint wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 08:57 am (UTC)
Oh god, please don't tell me that this is gonna lead to angst. I'll definitely hate you for that. *cries*
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:44 pm (UTC)
Gah, don't hate me!!!

(There will be angst, gotta happen, but it--most likely--will not end in angst. Sooo... yeah.)
[info]twiglet71 wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 09:45 am (UTC)
Wow I like this! Please continue with this sequel. Can't wait for next update xxx
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:44 pm (UTC)
Will continue, next one out as soon as I get it done. *grins*
[info]letitbegin wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 03:12 pm (UTC)
Changmin's breaks my heart. I really really love it. I want to print out those three passages and pin them to my wall.
The rest are also beautiful. I love your portrayals of all five, very acute I think.
I must bookmark this.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:46 pm (UTC)
Changmin broke by heart, too. Poor thing's so confused... *huggles Min*

*blushes, grins* Thank you, and I'm glad you liked!!
[info]mrsedjack wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 09:40 pm (UTC)
Aish. Changmin worries too much, it's not healthy ^^
Jae's is so sweet! 100% fairytale ending. <3

And Yunho's. And Yoochun's. And J- AHH, I LOVE ALL OF THEM! ^_________^

Can't wait for the next update!
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 7th, 2007 11:30 pm (UTC)
Min totally does worry too much. *searches for 'off' switch on Minnie's brain*

Glad you liked them all! *grins*
[info]kittypoker wrote:
Nov. 8th, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)
Man I got it all wrong when I read it the first time... But that was because I didn't quite remember. YunHo was the only one I got right too..... So yeah anyways. Keep up the good work. I hope to see more soon.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 8th, 2007 12:51 am (UTC)
You'll definitely be seeing more soon. *grins* And now you know the basic concept for the whole story, so you might be the only one who doesn't hurt me when certain things happen...
[info]kittypoker wrote:
Nov. 8th, 2007 12:52 am (UTC)
Of course i won't hurt you! Who else will I bug when I'm totally stuck in a fic? But yeah now that I have the basic concept of it I can't wait either.
[info]kratynoi wrote:
Nov. 9th, 2007 03:46 am (UTC)
Ooo!! I guessed Jaejoong, Yunho, and Changmin right (poor Changmin *pet pet*). It's interesting how you had each person get progressively pessimistic and...dark. I'm kind of afraid to see what's going to happen. But I'm definitely intrigued. ^^ I'm excited to see where this goes.
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Nov. 9th, 2007 05:56 am (UTC)
Yeah, I think those were the common three to get right. Apparently, I just failed at the YooSu characterizations for this chap... *shrugs*

But, yes, dark. It will be. 'Cause Min's just gotta be complicated like that... *sighs* At least I'm (tentatively) promising a happy ending!!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Nov. 9th, 2007 09:58 am (UTC)
Tentatively?!? I don't know if I can accept that. *pout* Fine fine. I guess we'll see how this goes. And I like Min being complicated. People are complicated beings and need problems in our lives to overcome. *nod nod*
[info]kratynoi wrote:
Nov. 9th, 2007 09:59 am (UTC)
Sorry, that was me. Forgot to log in. -.-'
[info]realitywaiting wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2007 03:22 am (UTC)
Ah HA! I so guessed jaejoong, yunho and changmin right! but i couldn't quite decide who was who with Junsu and Yoochun, but i did notice after the first two that you actually ended up going in age order...did you do that on purpose?....WAHHHH!! SO not liking the tone of this. there's going to angst and by the looks of it quite a bit isn't there? kiii! i'm starting to squirm! please tell me it's just in thier heads!!!!!!!! Still lovin it though!
[info]dreaming_col wrote:
Dec. 13th, 2007 04:05 am (UTC)
Wow. I... totally didn't even notice that whole age-order thing. *blinks*

Angst ahoy! 'Tis what I'm good at. *nods*
[info]reya13 wrote:
Oct. 4th, 2009 08:56 pm (UTC)
wonder what happened/is supposed to happen
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